In today's lesson each group evaluated everyone's work, from this we were able to receive feedback and constructive criticism. Below is the feedback we got, containing what was good about our opening, and also what could be improved:
What was good?
U1-35:
-The credits
-The ident
-Continuity
-The bag bit where it sometimes sped up
U1-34:
-Music ;)
-Sound effects
-Ident
U1-33:
-Good music that goes well with the film
U1-32:
-Love the music
-Close-ups
-Contridiction of blood and violent aspects with cheery music
-Created a good mystery
What could be improved?
U1-35:
-Not quite sure we understood the narrative
U1-34:
-Camera sounds
U1-33:
-Bit longer
-Didn't understand the storyline
U1-32:
- more fixation of dead body
- more like a horror (blood and dead body etc)
After reviewing our feedback we have realised that we need to remove all of the excess camera sounds from our opening. We will do this by lowering the volume of certain areas of the clips. We also want to make the storyline clearer, we can do this by focusing more on the dead body.
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